Should I..?

Okay I'm Thinking about publishing my poem called Rain.. Tell me what you think..

                                                   

                                                                 Rain.                                     In the rain all alone. No one to love or Care for.            Nothing to eat or wear. What does love truly mean if you've never experienced it..            I'm all alone in the rain, Anyone coming for me? I wish all night please come back.                      Mom Dad I miss You. But I'm still all alone in the cold pouring Rain.